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Adverts => Spamming in the Lion's Den => Topic started by: Glamour Photographer on 22 May 2014, 11:27:48 am
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Hello, I am a London based glamour photorgapher, please don't hesitate to contact me if you need a new portfolio:0) better portfolio- more work!!
www.juliaspenser.co.uk
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Hi, likewise I suggest that perhaps you have your website checked for spelling mistakes. Better website - more work. Oh and trust me Photoshop CAN fix a "sleepy" face... ;D
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Yes as GC said there are a few noticeable spelling mistakes.
Also the part where you are telling what to do is off putting as that is your personal opinion and not what everyone will want.
For example saying to get a manicure and pedicure and to shave/wax, there are women out there who aren't into manicures and fake nails and prefer to just keep their nails short and clean and then there are those who will prefer to be completely natural in regards to their body hair.
After all the photo's are meant to be about the client and having someone dolled up like Katie Price isn't much good if there persona is more Kate Middleton type.
Also the fact that you don't seem to have a gallery of any previous work is off putting as well.
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You should take GC's advice and rectify your spelling mistakes on your website, it would come across a lot more professional.
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Yes as GC said there are a few noticeable spelling mistakes.
Also the part where you are telling what to do is off putting as that is your personal opinion and not what everyone will want.
For example saying to get a manicure and pedicure and to shave/wax, there are women out there who aren't into manicures and fake nails and prefer to just keep their nails short and clean and then there are those who will prefer to be completely natural in regards to their body hair.
After all the photo's are meant to be about the client and having someone dolled up like Katie Price isn't much good if there persona is more Kate Middleton type.
Also the fact that you don't seem to have a gallery of any previous work is off putting as well.
I highly doubt Grumpy Cow was interested in the services you offer.
And with poor Customer Service like that nobody is going to be interested in what you offer.
You should take her advice and rectify your spelling mistakes on your website.
Ummm are you telling me off or the op?
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Yes as GC said there are a few noticeable spelling mistakes.
Also the part where you are telling what to do is off putting as that is your personal opinion and not what everyone will want.
For example saying to get a manicure and pedicure and to shave/wax, there are women out there who aren't into manicures and fake nails and prefer to just keep their nails short and clean and then there are those who will prefer to be completely natural in regards to their body hair.
After all the photo's are meant to be about the client and having someone dolled up like Katie Price isn't much good if there persona is more Kate Middleton type.
Also the fact that you don't seem to have a gallery of any previous work is off putting as well.
I highly doubt Grumpy Cow was interested in the services you offer.
And with poor Customer Service like that nobody is going to be interested in what you offer.
You should take her advice and rectify your spelling mistakes on your website.
Ummm are you telling me off or the op?
Sorry I've totally confused myself here lol! I was meant to be posting to the OP x
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I was wondering as I agreed with Grumpy Cow ;D