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James

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Agency Recruiting North West
« on: 09 March 2012, 05:30:31 pm »
Hi,

We are launching a new agency All Star Models in the north-west on the 6th of April.

We are looking for adult entertainers aged 18 upwards.

If you are interested email me at info@all-star-models.com

our website is now officially

www.all-star-models.com

so feel free to have a look around the site design and get in touch regarding opening or any feedback is much appreciated on the site

Thank you
« Last Edit: 09 March 2012, 10:13:23 pm by James »

MissThang

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Re: Agency Recruiting North West
« Reply #1 on: 14 March 2012, 12:07:11 am »
Bit of feedback - the site is nice overall, but there is a TON of spelling mistakes on it. On a 'just my personal opinion' level, it comes across like you're trying to distance yourself from your role in proceedings (the whole 'we just introduce people' thing). I understand why, but I doubt very much it would save you in court, and it could come across to customers that they're doing something illegal by booking a girl, and might put a few off. Also the 'six is the magic number' thing is kinda condescending, particularly since you don't do the photos in house. ;D But apart from that it's nice (sort the spelling out though, for the love of god.....)

James

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Re: Agency Recruiting North West
« Reply #2 on: 14 March 2012, 04:39:17 am »
Hi Sarah,

thanks for the feedback, much appreciated.

I will have to check the spelling throughout the site. Normally spelling is flagged up automatically like when you type in this forum but because i am using a code editor it does not so will have to check through it again. Tedious but i respect your opinion. Spelling was always my weakness even from school days. 

I could maybe move the disclaimer to another page and make it less prominent like other sites, sort of the fine print that nobody reads section on any site whether to do with the adult industry or tarot readings sites. But yes i will make it less prominent on the site like other sites do. I know a disclaimer is not a bullet proof shield but its seems the standard thing to have on a website and at least shows intent.

I hear what you mean about the photos, I would like to offer in house photos but at the moment we do not have the facilities for that and would have to outsource. I am aware that some agencies do take photos but i do not have the expertise to do that but it is something that i can look in to offering in the future or if any of the ladies who work in the north west can help out in that respect get in touch.

I'm going to get onto the spelling mistakes, as you can probably tell, i coded the website myself so the spelling mistakes fall on  my responsibility. I'm kind of embarrassed ;-) But deffo going to get that sorted in the next few days and sort out the Terms and conditions section.

Check back on the site in a few days so you can grade my work. Im aiming for an A* Miss lol

Thanks again Sarah

James x