errr, didnt i say somewhere not to ruin my illusion about men only looking at the pics & rates?
Brandy you spoil sport!!!
Go for it cassie, I cant wait to see the results.... there's goiing to be a whole host of ironing board photography out there soon :-) I've set a new trend!!
Ive changed my text a bit on my site. If you get the chance have a read... and see if you can resist calling me now!!!!! lol (Brandy, feel free to act as editor and send me any corrections, like you i hate grammar and spelling mistakes but I type so quickly i often get it wrong then miss things when i read through).
Infact any suggestions would be helpful (except about ironing board photo's) and gratefully received.
Ta. x
L.x
I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to burst your bubble. Consider me chastised.

Your site does look great. Having a cursory glance, on the "about me" page, 3rd para down, it should be "dress
ed appropriately".
On the "Services" page, again 3rd para down, you're missing an apostrophe on "its". On the last line on the same page, in this context "whichever" is one word.
On the "Rates" page, you need to separate the two words "at" and "least".
The para under your quoted rates, there's no apostrophe in "applies".
On your "Etiquette" page, on "cleanliness", you need a comma here: "this is not personal
, it just reassures me."
On your FAQs, there's an apostrophe in "photos" in that context. You've misspelt "believe". Again, 3rd para down, it should be "by", not "buy". In your 7th para, it looks like it reads "a swell", instead of "as well". I'm not sure if that's just the font or my eyes, though.
You might also consider on the same page, by way of an intro, where you're based, especially as you're outcall only, you could put down the areas you're willing to cover. It's not immediately apparent. You want to draw those guys in as soon as you can. If guys can't see where you are on the first page, they get lazy and give up. I know you're based in Devon, but that took me the fourth menu button to click and find that out.
That's my
analytical view,lol. Considering you put it together yourself, it's a great website. Seven years later and I still know jacks**t about putting a site together. You should be proud of your work.