Bloody hell! That was quick,lol.
Not bad for a moonfruit site. Great pictures, you're gorgeous. I reckon you'll do very well.
The anal retentive in me has to say though that you're missing a few full stops and commas. Have a proof read of your script and you'll see where.

Under security, maybe you should make it clear that customers details are destroyed once you're home safe and sound. Just to give them the comfort that you don't store them.
And under your rates page, maybe a full evening also needs to be made clear. A specific time, 7pm-1am, 8pm till whatever it is you have in mind. You and customers will probably have a different idea of how long a full evening might be.

I love the term "lady garden."

I think it's great - well done!!! 

Your pics are lovely too - and isn't it satisfying to know you've worked it all out yourself? I wouldn't worry too much about not having a phone number on yet - some ladies don't put one on their sites at all and only allow initial contact by email (they probably weed out a lot of prats like this too - I've just had another of the 'I'm interested in anal but I've got a 10 inch penis - most girls can't cope with it' ones - yawn). It's not as immediate as an actual conversation so it might be easier for you to start off with - you can think your responses through for longer until you have decided you are happy with them and haven't missed anything out, (although you do need a work phone, definitely - you need to keep things separate if only in case it gets nicked, or you have to leave somewhere in a hurry; you don't want anyone being able to ring your mum or your friends).

I'm sure you'll do great! Keep us all posted x

Great thanks for your replies I am going to just touch it up and then put my listing directories on so hopefully it all goes well, thanks Liz.