Why would somebody even go to the effort of sending this
I just wondered if you would like to be able to make a series of very small changes to your profile just to help it read better.
All I am suggesting is removing a few commas! If this annoys you just ignore it - people can still understand you perfectly well.
Those that are not needed (with the section title they are in) are:
Texts: bookings,
About Me: natural,
Location: message,
What clients...: clients, see, right, clients,
Client etiquette: incall, always, same, yourselves, anybody,
How do I book?: displayed,
Me a retired English teacher? How did you guess...